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IELTS Writing Task 2
Corporate sponsorship in sports
Increasing crime levels
21st Century
Extreme Sports
Practical skills and knowledge
Difference in Salaries
Second-hand goods
Video Games and Children Nowadays
Buying New or Repairing Old
Job Application and the Elderly
Wealth and Technology
Children with Disabilities
Vegetarianism
Art or Sports?
Socially Responsible Businesses
Children’s Choice
Technology and Communication
Danger of Extreme Sports
21st Century Optimism
Children and Responsibilities
Online Learning
Science in Schools
Roads or Railways
Online Education
Driving Age
Culture Against Technology
Writing Letters
Society and its Attitude to Consumption
High Salaries
Corporate Sponsorship
History as a Subject
Art and Music
Stressed young people
Stressed young people (#2)
CAE Writing
CAE Writing Part 1: Preparing for Working Life
CAE Writing Part 1: Preparing for Working Life II
CAE Writing Part 1: Time Abroad
CAE Writing Part 1: Time Abroad II
CAE Writing Part 1: Helping Immigrants
CAE Writing Part 1: Helping Immigrants II
CAE Writing Part 1: Helping Immigrants III
CAE Writing Part 1: Life and Technology
CAE Writing Part 1: Money from Authorities
CAE Proposal: Flexible Working Day
CAE Proposal: Preserving the Old Academy Building
CAE Proposal: Hobby Club
CAE Essay: Technology in Our Life
CAE Essay: Living in Cities
FCE Writing
FCE Writing Part 1: Teenagers and Free Time
FCE Writing Part 2 (Article): Photographs
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Q: It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree?
A: Children deserve all the affection and care in the world when they are younger to grow up to become loving people who can spread love. It’s relatively harder to make time for your child living in a big city, trying to get to point A to B to work and make ends meet.
The biggest concern in big cities is pollution, be it air, soil, or water, and in the countryside, those problems are almost non-existent which ensures the prevention of pollution-related diseases for young people. With fresh air and untouched nature, a child is surely to grow up healthy and cheerful as he or she can go out and play wherever and whenever, without having to worry about stranger danger.
Second of all, the size of the countryside that’s developed is rather small most of the time, so no two-hour drive to get to work for parents, no traffic jams that take all the family time away from you, and not many nightclubs that tempt you, resulting more family time, healthier relationships and better role models for children.
Even though it can be too mundane at times, if you are trying to get away from big busy cities it can give you that peace and quiet. The countryside is usually filled with warmhearted people caring towards one another as they depend on each other. Not only do you get to know your neighbor, but you also get to know your entire village because of the scarce population which helps you socialize and learn from each other.
All in all, if you wish for your child to grow up healthy with a caring and loving nature, the best decision you could ever make is to choose to raise them in the countryside, showing all the beauty in life since they are young… (302 words)