IELTS Writing Samples

The IELTS Writing samples below were submitted by users and I have checked them myself. Each writing sample has its mistakes corrected and there’s a short commentary for each inaccuracy. At the end of the essay there is a brief summary.

You too can submit your IELTS writing and I will do my best to assess it.

IELTS Writing Task 2: Art and Music

Art and music are considered some of the fundamental elements of all societies. Do you think art and music still have a place in today’s modern world of technology? Should children spend more time learning ...
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IELTS Writing Task 2: Corporate Sponsorship

Some companies sponsor sport as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while others think there are disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Popularity leading to higher revenues People ...
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IELTS Writing Task 2: High Salaries

In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level ...
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IELTS Writing Task 2: Online Education

Universities offer an online course for students. Do you think its a positive or negative development for students? Learning variants People are divided in their opinion regarding whether online courses serve for the betterment of ...
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IELTS Writing Task 2: 21st Century Optimism

Many people are optimistic of the 21st century and see it as an opportunity to make positive changes to the world. To what extent do you share their optimism? What changes would you like to ...
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IELTS Writing Task 2: Danger of Extreme Sports

Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view? Safety First Many people claim that risky sports including ...
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IELTS Writing Task 2: Roads or Railways

Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? The usage of government money to enhance the railway system is preferable (1) than utilizing ...
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IELTS Writing Task 2: Children’s Choice

Some people argue that children should do what their parents tell them to do. Other people think that children should learn how to think for themselves. Discuss both views and give your opinion. It is ...
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IELTS Writing Task 2: Wealth and Technology

Some people think the range of technology currently available is increasing the gap between rich people and poor people. Others think it is causing the opposite side effect. Discuss both views and give your opinion ...
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IELTS Writing Task 2: Second-hand goods

Nowadays many people are buying fewer new things and more second hand goods. What are the possible reason for this trend? Is it positive or negative ? The trend of purchasing used goods is on ...
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